Belle and the broken stage
Belle and the broken stage.
Once upon a time long long ago -well two days ago there lived a pegusus named Belle. Belle lived in a old ballet studio the studio was 500 metres long + wide. Belle was the 2nd best ballerina in the whole world well that,s what Belle thought Belle could do a parterre across 1 metre of the stage. Belle was practising for half an hour dancing to swan lake Belle made a wrong step and fell on her leg and broke her bone because of her clumsiness something went wrong.Belle broke the stage she felt very sorry for her teachers studio.
Belle went to the peg-ware and brought every thing back but Belle got pore.
Belle thought how will I figure this out with no money because money fixes everything !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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I really liked your writing Isobelle just you should really put a hook in for your intro, but appart from that, I liked your writing.. :)
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